Front Teeth

burning-green-clouds

Front teeth on grey concrete,
cry stilled by wonder. Silence
between shock and pain
displaced. Clouds knuckle-white
hovered. The choice was there
to shatter further.

But no.

She picked up those teeth, her teeth,
unhinged doors of a toy car.
Her tongue groped for shards
that clung to flesh.
Her hand grew immense,
gathered sky, road,
and all of her into one
tight fist.

How she stared down
at every one.

-o-


This also appears on Helium.  Not very popular there, which reveals more about the readers and members there than about the piece.  Or does it?

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About matangmanok

Jim Pascual Agustin writes and translates poetry. Sometimes he tries his hand at essays and stories. In 2011 the University of Santo Tomas Publishing House in Manila released BAHA-BAHAGDANG KARUPUKAN (poems in Filipino) and ALIEN TO ANY SKIN (poems in English). The same publisher released his most recent poetry collections SOUND BEFORE WATER and KALMOT NG PUSA SA TAGILIRAN. In 2015 a new poetry collection in English, A THOUSAND EYES was released. His first collection of short stories in Filipino, SANGA SA BASANG LUPA, was released in 2016. UK publisher The Onslaught Press launches his latest poetry collection, WINGS OF SMOKE, worldwide in February 2017. View all posts by matangmanok

7 responses to “Front Teeth

  • Secretlee

    Jim,

    Rest assured.. the poem is as good as any of yours. You still have the power to make me feel and see things that I never have before.

    You have incredible insight and a way of constructing your poems that combines the technical aspects of writing with the passion that fuels the poems.

    Keep writing. You are ahead of your time.

    Secretlee..;-)) (you know who i am!)

  • matangmanok

    Secretlee,

    Thanks. I am glad you found your way here. I feel a little funny hearing such praise from you.

    Jim

  • Secretlee

    Lil ole me Jim? lol stop being modest. You know you are a great writer. I’m so glad you have finally found a place to show off your work, that does you some justice.

    The universe is an incredible place… and you are an incredible person. Keep your eyes open Jim, the future is here and now.. and its in your hands.

  • matangmanok

    Secretlee,

    If you ever saw my hands you wouldn’t say such things! 😛 Think “Yoda hands.”

  • Secretlee

    Yoda was very wise.

  • Rexen M

    I don’t know about your Hands, Keep up the writing. More to follow

    • matangmanok

      Hi and welcome to Matangmanok, Rexen! Thanks for the comment. Always great to meet new people. I’d love to hear what you think of this little place for my scribblings. Hope you visit again soon.

      Jim
      ps the hands that moved Yoda belonged to one of my heroes, Jim Henson (if I remember that bit of Star Wars trivia right)

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