
The Breath of Sparrows
for Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela
So it has arrived, the news
of your departure. Last night
I dreamt I was in the house
of my mentor, as a frequent guest
who took a desk by the window.
A towering tree with red
and yellow flowers as big as hands,
the breeze slipping between each
petal finger. I went to his room
to ask the name of that tree.
He lay on his bed, resting
with eyes closed but aware
of the birds weighing down
the branches, leaves caressing
the roof. The breath of sparrows
like his own. There was no need to name
the tree, no need to name anything
at all at that moment. I bid him thanks
before leaving, my footsteps drowning
in sparrow wings.
-o-
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Jim Pascual Agustin writes and translates poetry. Sometimes he tries his hand at essays and stories.
His latest book is BLOODRED DRAGONFLIES, published by Deep South in South Africa. Check out the official blog page for Bloodred Dragonflies.
In 2011 the University of Santo Tomas Publishing House in Manila released BAHA-BAHAGDANG KARUPUKAN (poems in Filipino) and ALIEN TO ANY SKIN (poems in English). The same publisher released his most recent poetry collections SOUND BEFORE WATER and KALMOT NG PUSA SA TAGILIRAN. In 2015 a new poetry collection in English, A THOUSAND EYES was released. His first collection of short stories in Filipino, SANGA SA BASANG LUPA, was released in 2016. UK publisher The Onslaught Press launches his poetry collection, WINGS OF SMOKE, worldwide in February 2017. San Anselmo Publications released HOW TO MAKE A SALAGUBANG HELICOPTER & OTHER POEMS in 2019 followed by CROCODILES IN BELFAST & OTHER POEMS in 2020 - both books can be purchased through their Facebook page.
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December 12th, 2013 at 17:52
I love this, Jim.
December 12th, 2013 at 18:03
Thanks, Pat.
January 4th, 2014 at 14:38
Beautiful, Jim.
January 4th, 2014 at 14:56
Thank you, Ryan!
December 5th, 2014 at 09:32
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January 26th, 2017 at 21:01
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March 7th, 2017 at 23:09
Thank you for this comment :))
March 8th, 2017 at 10:28
which comment?
March 11th, 2017 at 15:56
I was really amazed by your poem but I just want to clarify things, what tree are you referring to the poem? I mean how does it function as an important image in the poem? Thank you 🙂 I’ll wait for your response. Godbless 🙂
March 12th, 2017 at 09:50
Thanks for visiting my blog and finding time to comment. I really appreciate it. This is an early version of the poem. The final one is in my new book, WINGS OF SMOKE. I prefer not to explain my own poem, to be honest. With this one in particular it is crucial NOT to identify the tree as doing would diminish the mystery and intent of the piece.
Hope that is good enough for you.
March 12th, 2017 at 10:12
Thank you, I totally understand your point. Thank you 🙂
March 12th, 2017 at 10:15
Honestly, I am going ta have a report about this poem and Mandela’s Legacy and I don’t have any idea about him.
March 12th, 2017 at 11:23
We all have to start somewhere. Wikipedia. Good luck!
March 11th, 2020 at 18:10
Mr. Jim can I ask where did wrote your poem? The Breath of Sparrows?
March 12th, 2020 at 11:26
In South Africa
January 18th, 2021 at 10:41
I love how mysterious this poem is. I thought I figured it out but at some point there’s still some missing pieces to wonder about.
February 19th, 2021 at 17:48
It feels surreal to find your blog! At least I am able to interact with the author (though indirectly) of the piece I am analyzing and deciphering. God bless Sir Jim! I hope to see you someday.
February 20th, 2021 at 10:59
Thank you. Maybe one lucky day, then. Good luck with your own journey!